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Monday, December 9, 2013

Thesis Statement & First Paragraph Paper # 2 (10/31)


Thesis Statement
Ms. Hamer and Mr. Collier were great teachers and had the ability to garner my attention and focus to the subject matter they taught, they did so in different ways.

First Paragraph
My first year of public school was the 7th grade as I had been homeschooled by my mom and grandma from kindergarten through 6th grade. Although I had many teachers that year, the one who made the transition from homeschool to public school a lot less stressful was Ms. Hamer. She was known to take her students outside to energize their bodies and minds by having the kids play sports that were modified to include English lessons. The ambiance for her classroom was very inviting but for a 12 year old kid, being outside was what we drooled over like hungry dogs when they hear the dog food bag shake.  “Tag you’re in!” a student would exclaim, which usually meant it was your turn to give an answer to a question followed by the absolute fulfillment of kicking a soccer ball as hard as you could toward a large weathered net.  I don’t quite know how it worked, but my brain was able to suck in information like a sponge whether I was kicking soccer balls or defending the flag of my team in an unrelated but equally entertaining Mr. Hamer sponsored activity. Ms. Hamer was very soft spoken although her ability to motivate had her students hanging on every word that she so calmly voiced. She was a relatively small person physically; maybe 5 ft even and weighed enough that a 12 year old could hoist her above their shoulders. Her size was misleading however as the content of her message and her ability to relate gained the respect of even the most dispassionate and cold-blooded mischief makers.

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